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i've been working on something, this is a piece of it.


there's a silence surrounding me
i can't seem to think straight
i'll sit in the corner
no one can bother me
i think i should speak now
i can't seem to speak now
my words won't come out right
i feel like i'm drowning...

--'keep talking' pink floyd (gilmour)

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:iconshadowed-angel:
Hell, I want to fave the last bit as an individual piece. It's so intensely powerful.

Stop it :XD:

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I really cannot understand why people choose to ignore the "ART" part of deviantART
It's in fucking capitals!
How can you miss it!?

*The-Shadowed-Angel
~jaded-reflection
~kapari
:icondgenreteliterabbit:
i posted that line alone, just for you. :D

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RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
#TheWritersMeow
:iconelegantfaith:
Right on. :D
I like this one

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"Be kind to all you meet because everyone is fighting some kind of battle."
:icondgenreteliterabbit:
thank you

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RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
#TheWritersMeow
:iconjoshuschrist822:
These poems, as small, beautiful and simple as they are, put my entire bogus project to shame.

It's great to see you back, and with fantastic reinforcement.

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If you wind up with a boring, miserable life because you listened to your mom, your dad, your teacher, your priest or some guy on TV telling how to do your shit, then YOU DESERVE IT. -FZ

Support Originality: REPO! the Genetic Opera www.repo-opera.com
:icondgenreteliterabbit:
god i only hope this is good enough.

thanks josh, as always. i'm nervy about being around here. frightened to say things but scribbling anyway. this place gives me the creeps some days. i'm not sure what i'm looking at, a porno site or a trashy art site (and not the humourous john waters kind of trash but the perverse daily trash that makes the world a bit more murkier.) besides being in a considerable ammount of discomfort for some 14 days, my brain felt like it needed some kind of cleansing from this place. i practically refused to speak to myself. so i'm still wary, you understand. i can always count on you and a rare few others here but the community is a prison fathomless. it's hard to swim out.
at least now i feel like i have words to say instead of tiny frightened animal sounds.
i dunno why i just wrote all that, kinda hoping you'll know what i'm saying i guess.

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RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
#TheWritersMeow
:iconjoshuschrist822:
And i do, in an odd way. i've been finding that catharsis is more necessary than i thought. And if that means you need to retreat and sort yourself out, and channel that into a select few words with more power and emotion that i've been able to grasp, than i say give 'em hell.

It's apparently a great day to ramble.

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If you wind up with a boring, miserable life because you listened to your mom, your dad, your teacher, your priest or some guy on TV telling how to do your shit, then YOU DESERVE IT. -FZ

Support Originality: REPO! the Genetic Opera www.repo-opera.com
:iconcurious-spider:
I really like this series; I'm glad to see you're back! There's an undertone of sensuality that slowly floats to the surface as I read each part. That last stanza was lovely and brought the sensuality to a head.

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:damphyr: 未来の僕らの手の中!:damphyr:

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