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he turned and grinned at me like an imp
azure eyes trailing in the dark like photoflash.

"come close," he said.
and only fickle air stood between us.

sighing in pre-dawn mist
he flicked at my shirt collar
eyes piercing right into me
roguish contempt
a boy teasing a girl
because he already knew
exactly why i was there.
©2009-2010 *DgenRetEliteRabbit
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i've been working on something, this is a piece of it.


there's a silence surrounding me
i can't seem to think straight
i'll sit in the corner
no one can bother me
i think i should speak now
i can't seem to speak now
my words won't come out right
i feel like i'm drowning...

--'keep talking' pink floyd (gilmour)

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:iconcharlemaine:
"eyes trailing in the dark like photoflash."

yesss =D love that line. that line turns me on & rocks my ass off. wow your poetry has been getting so good recently.

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:blackrose::kiss::blackrose::kiss:
I Want Your Horror
I Want Your Design
I Want Your Love and
I Want Your Revenge.
:icondgenreteliterabbit:
my favorite line too! thanks. :hug:

--
RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
#TheWritersMeow

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