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monster.
he's a monster.
he even glows like a demon.

if i tell myself this enough,
it will be true.
right?

circling around the room
sizing him up
i'd never been this close to him
i could almost smell him
and it made me lightheaded.

when abyss blue eyes finally
nailed my meagerness to the floor,
and
caught in the heavy-lidded gaze of hunger,
he smiled as if he'd known all along
and slayed me.

my drink dropped fourteen stories
toppling against linen and rayon-cotton blend
to sputter into the plush and stone
of the floor he nailed me to.
©2009-2010 *DgenRetEliteRabbit
:icondgenreteliterabbit:

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three days long i [link]

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i've been working on something, this is a piece of it.


there's a silence surrounding me
i can't seem to think straight
i'll sit in the corner
no one can bother me
i think i should speak now
i can't seem to speak now
my words won't come out right
i feel like i'm drowning...

--'keep talking' pink floyd (gilmour)

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:iconcharlemaine:
if i go to my message alerts, will i see a journal entry explaining this intriguing series??

=)

great stuff. i assume that bits of this is actually true. if so, u lead a very interesting life...

--
:blackrose::kiss::blackrose::kiss:
I Want Your Horror
I Want Your Design
I Want Your Love and
I Want Your Revenge.
:icondgenreteliterabbit:
well, in the midst of meandering through my own little breakdown and recovery, i was using a more elaborate version of this to occupy my mind in nervier moments, like trying to sleep. i'll admit something to you tho, because you asked, Auden is based after a middle-aged david gilmour. i'm kind of ashamed.

no unfortunately none of it is true, tho i guess i might've picked up the watching from across the room bit from when i met mr. rabbit (he has blue eyes too! eee!)

--
RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
#TheWritersMeow
:iconcharlemaine:
why ashamed? some of the characters in my stories are unabashedly inspired by certain famous people i wanna rape. =D and im sure we all do the same thing. u didn't let mr Gilmour overwhelm the character tho; you may borrow some of his qualities but but not copying him wholesale. i dont feel like the man in this series is ripped from any one persona.

--
:blackrose::kiss::blackrose::kiss:
I Want Your Horror
I Want Your Design
I Want Your Love and
I Want Your Revenge.
:iconanalillithbar:
Holy crap on a stick!!! :iconyomp:

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:love::la::heart:
:icondgenreteliterabbit:
:giggle:

--
RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
#TheWritersMeow

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